Should I mention the official behaviour criteria directly?
Using the Official Behaviour Criteria in a Civil Service Statement
Hello,
I am applying for HEO roles and use the official behaviour points as a checklist. My draft includes sentences such as “I ensured the most appropriate resources were available” and “I regularly monitored work against milestones”.
Those phrases match the Delivering at Pace criteria, but I am concerned the statement sounds copied and artificial.
Should I name or quote the criteria directly?
Quick Answer
Use the official criteria to plan and audit the statement, but prove them through natural evidence. You do not gain credit for repeating the wording. A short phrase from the criterion is fine when it fits the sentence, provided the action explains what you actually did.
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