A behaviour statement is not a list of the criteria and it is not a description of how you usually work. It is evidence from a specific situation. The advert may set a 250-word limit, identify a lead behaviour or give additional instructions, so always check the live application before drafting.
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The nine EO behaviours
What makes an example strong at EO level
Use the criteria as a selection tool
Before writing, place the official criteria beside each potential example. Mark the criteria that are demonstrated by a concrete action. If most links depend on phrases such as ‘this shows I understand’ rather than events in the story, choose another example or identify missing actions.
A practical 250-word structure
| Approximate space | Purpose | Content |
|---|---|---|
| 35 to 50 words | Situation and task | Context, challenge, your responsibility and what was at stake |
| 150 to 175 words | Actions | Checks, reasoning, decisions, communication, coordination and response to difficulty |
| 25 to 45 words | Result | Outcome, benefit, feedback, measure and sustained learning |
The split is not a rule, but it prevents background from consuming the statement. Most marks are normally earned through the actions and reasoning, so that is where most words should go.
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